When women meet for the first time they can pretty much tell within five minutes if they're going to like that person or not. With Karon, it only took me two seconds especially after I heard she's a shop-aholic shoe freak like me. Do I wear anything other than flipflops? No, but that's another story.
Karon stopped by and left us an article on "How to Write Persuavisve Subject Lines". It's a great article so kick your shoes off and stay awhile! ;)
How To Write Persuasive Subject Lines
by Karon Thackston © 2005
Three seconds and 40 characters. That's all you usually have to work with when trying to get and hold the attention of someone reading email. And, with user behavior changing so much in response to overwhelming amounts of spam, the attention spans of email readers are getting shorter. Needless to say, it's vital to make the most of your introduction via the email subject line.
Email marketing powerhouse DoubleClick.com conducts annual surveys with regard to user behavior when it comes to email. A couple of the statistics from their latest findings are interesting. The second biggest motivator in opening email is the subject line. (The first is the "from" line.)
Because subject lines are often truncated at around 40 characters -- and because email readers usually have their index fingers poised over the delete button -- we're left with about three seconds and approximately six words to make an impression. So what works? Which types of subject lines have proven to be successful? Here are my top three.
Make an Offer
It's an old sales cliché that still holds true in the fast-paced world of cyberspace: Lead with your best offer. Whether a product, a service or a proposal, you want to tell people up front about your deepest discounts, your fastest delivery or your grandest idea. Get their attention right off the bat, and you'll likely have your message read. (It's even better if your offer happens to be time sensitive.) Examples include:
Half Off Leather Boots Until March 1st
Top 10 Reasons to Attend [Whatever]
Your Link on High Ranking Web Pages
State a Benefit
Since the majority of consumer and B2B customers live in the "what's in it for me" world, benefits always make powerful subject lines. Telling the readers what the end results of their actions will be helps them visualize the need for your product or service. Here are a few examples based on the subject lines above:
Wear Fall's Hottest Trends for 50% Off
Learn [Whatever] in Only Two Days
Build Link Popularity & Traffic for Your Site
We're all nosey to a point. Our curiosity gets the best of us, and we want to know more. That's not only true when it comes to watching movie previews on TV. It's also true for email as well. Some of the best subject lines hook readers by piquing their curiosity, and then reel them in to read the entire message.
Are You Still Wearing These Fashion "Don'ts”?
The Secrets to [Whatever] Never Before Revealed
Link Popularity Scams You Should Avoid
Of course, the key to writing the best subject lines is knowing your target customers, making the topic relevant and testing, testing, testing.
I mentioned a "couple" interesting facts from the DoubleClick email survey. The second is that relevancy is a major player. Over 55% of respondents said they deleted email that wasn't relevant because they considered it spam. DoubleClick also reported that the average open rate was 27.5% (for text or HTML messages). That gives you a baseline to gauge your success.
Not every type of subject line will work for every campaign. Testing is vital. And it's easy enough to do. One of my favorite ways is to set up a Google AdWords campaign and judge the clickthrough rates. This quickly (and cheaply) tells you which subject lines will work and which won't. You can also test your subject lines by sending your emails to a smaller test list before broadcasting it to the entire group.
Whichever styles of subject lines you choose make sure you know your target audience so you can develop relevant subject lines. Then test and test again until you've created subjects that are highly persuasive and deliver record-breaking open rates.
Karon Thackston has been creating results-oriented copy for all mediums for the past 22 years. Her understanding of how buying behavior influences customers' purchasing decisions is a primary factor in the success she creates for her clients. Karon has spoken at several Search Engine Strategies conferences and is also regularly featured at Jill Whalen's Search Engine Marketing seminars. Visit Karon online at www.marketingwords.com for more information.